The set of multimedia productions including the Wood Bison Disease Testing video, the good luck charms and reflections of the United States soldiers in the Middle East, and the Boy in the Moon, comprised a wide range of styles and subject matter to varying success.
The first video depicting Wood Bison was only marginally successful, and could have been significantly bettered with a few compositional and tactical alternations. Shot on the following caption:
“Wildlife biologist Cathie Harms describes the scene as wood bison are corralled for handling and disease testing at the Alaska Wildlife Conservation Center Wednesday March 18, 2009 in Portage. About 80 of the animals underwent testing this week as preparations continue by the state to eventually release the animals and restore wild populations to Alaska, where they roamed until disappearing sometime over the last few hundred years. The wood bison were imported from Canada.”
the story, at least initially, had much potential and promised to be a fairly rowdy show. Yet, in actuality and execution, the production was lacking in various aspects, both in terms of composition and subject material. First, the story was too long for the collected material, and probably should have focused more on the boisterous nature of the wild bison rather than merely on the premise of animal testing. Even with my limited knowledge and experience at creating and viewing multimedia productions of this sort, it seems a common trend that the story, or at least the angle, changes from the conception of the idea to the completion of the project. After beginning the shoot, it seems apparent, almost immediately, that the real story lies in dealing with these wild creatures. The story would have been significantly improved if it included interviews from the bison boys and the dangers and details of their job. At one point in the video, there are some good sequence stills of one of the bison boys being mowed over by the bison, but the voice over is inconsistent with the shots, and indeed does not even reference the event. A better approach would have been to refocus the dialogue to expand upon this sequence, bringing light to the reality corraling and testing these beasts.
In short, the story as it stands is too long, not captivating enough to merit the length, and (subjectively) mis-focued. The footage of the bisons in action was the highlight of the video, and yet was hidden past midway through the video after over a minute of dry dialogue. The video lacks compositional variety, interest, and excitement that would have taken this video from rather drab and purely informational to enticing and educational.
The second video, which captures the reflections of a number of soldiers deployed in the Middle East, was artfully composed to an emotional degree. While there was some redundancy in the selection of stories, and in this way, could have been shortened by a couple of accounts, it adhered to high compositional and content standards. The combination of stills, videos, and audio created a dramatic and touching tone throughout the piece. Further, the use of black and white shots contrasting the color video segments distinguished between the real life moments and the harshness of combat. The portraits were particularly impactive and well-done. The combination of detail shots, wide-angle shots, and personalization of the subjects through video gave a complete and multi-dimensional feel to the production.
As impressive as the slideshow was, however, there were a couple of areas that could be strengthened to improve the overall quality and impact of the piece. Some degree of ambient sound, rather than exclusive voice-overs, would have helped drive home the fact that these men are thousands of miles away in the middle of a war. Adding this extra sensory detail would strengthen the narration of the men, as well as complete the intensity of their reality. Again, while each story was adequately personalized and revealed the character of its narrator, there was some overlap in content and theme which should have in some way been addressed. Still, even with these considerations, the piece was produced to great effect.
The final selection, the Boy in the Moon, held a number of strengths, but suffered from a few key weaknesses as well. The emotional context, that “For eight years, every night is the same. The same routine of countless details, connected in precise order, each mundane, each crucial,” sets the stage for the multifaceted and chaptered story in the life of Walter Brown. The first segment, 1001 nights, consists largely of narration by Walter’s father, Ian, as he establishes a background for the piece and reflects on the joys and hardships of parenting a handicapped child. Immediately, one of the strengths of the piece is that it is set in black and white, which brings the focus to the subject of the story and creates a somber atmosphere worthy of the content. The soft instrument enhances this feeling, building to show Walter intently watching the player strum. The alternating stills, interviews, and video communicates the whole story. The combination of the very detailed account of Walter’s behavior, the reality of his disease, and the support of the photos helps create an all-inclusive picture of what it means to be part of Walter’s life. The choice of transitions, generally to (or from) a video from (or to) a still has the interesting affect of emphasizing the routine of Walter and Ian’s life, how they all seem to be the same, but are all individual moments to remember. Further, the story from Ian’s perspective, contrasting his life with Walter’s, how they are separate and yet intertwined, brings a real and emotional element to the story. In those respects, the composition furthers the content of the story.
Even though the first chapter alone is more than eight minutes, the length does not really bother me or detract from the story. Perhaps because it is comprised of multiple chapters, or because of the mellow and yet dramatic subject material, if anything, the length contributes positively to the piece as a whole. This selection differs from the others in that it is an ongoing account, and thus does not have the finality of the other pieces, but even as a self-contained piece, 1001 nights does a good job of building interest and resolving (sectionally) Ian’s reflections by the end.